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  • Job

  • I am a senior software engineer.
  • This job involves providing analyzing requirements of the clients and designing the suitable software for them.
  • I focus on the telecomm industry and good at CRM.
  • Btw CRM means customer relationship management.
  • For example if you have a huge client group in your company.
  • You can use this CRM system to trace your customer and keep contact with them.

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