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  • Job

  • I am a senior software engineer.
  • This job involves providing analyzing requirements of the clients and designing the suitable software for them.
  • I focus on the telecomm industry and good at CRM.
  • Btw CRM means customer relationship management.
  • For example if you have a huge client group in your company.
  • You can use this CRM system to trace your customer and keep contact with them.
  • I would say there are two main reason why I enjoy my job.
  • Firstly, it give me the opportunity to meet with lots of creative people including my colleagues and the clients.
  • Secondly, it allow me to travel on occasion, because my company’s customers base on different cities in China.
  • For me it’s as if a breakup.

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