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Swimming
In my spare time.
I like doing some sports with my friends.
For example swimming.
For me the swimming is my favorite.
Because it can help me to keep full of energy to deal with daily job.
Through swimming I can make some friends also.
We know each other in the swimming pool and after the sport we can share the experience, for example how to improve the skill of the swimming or how to swim faster.
I am glad to do this.

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- In my spare time.
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- I like doing some sports with my friends.
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- For example swimming.
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- For me the swimming is my favorite.
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- Because it can help me to keep full of energy to deal with daily job.
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- Through swimming I can make some friends also.
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- We know each other in the swimming pool and after the sport we can share the experience, for example how to improve the skill of the swimming or how to swim faster.
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- I am glad to do this.
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