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My daughter's pet
Hello !
My daughter has a beautiful rabbit black and white.
He is small and fat, he's like a potatoe.
At wake up, he begins to eat.
All along the day he eats, eats and eats.
Sometimes, i think he's mad because he don't stop to run around the room.
We love him very much so we take care of him.

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- Hello !
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- My daughter has a beautiful rabbit black and white.
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- He is small and fat, he's like a potatoe.
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- At wake up, he begins to eat.
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- All along the day he eats, eats and eats.
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- Sometimes, i think he's mad because he don't stop to run around the room.
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- We love him very much so we take care of him.
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