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  • she listened his name from people around her and saw him and didn't know that was he he and she met many times as strangers by chance he talked to a girl near his girl and she listened his speical voice for a first time After a month ,he became her director by chance and one day he talked to her with focused eyes have a lot of words and from this day they weren't strangers

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    • she listened his name from people around her and saw him and didn't know that was he he and she met many times as strangers by chance he talked to a girl near his girl and she listened his speical voice for a first time After a month ,he became her director by chance and one day he talked to her with focused eyes have a lot of words and from this day they weren't strangers
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