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My computer sucked
My computer sucked.
Last Friday, I had used my computer in the morning, it was still fine.
But, when I backed to home at night, no reason, it sucked, the screen was black.
On Monday, I took my computer to the engineer, he said my motherboard was ruined.
Finally, I paid NT.3800 to fix my computer.
It's really painful...

ShihsFebruary 2013투표하세요!
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- My computer sucked.
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- Last Friday, I had used my computer in the morning, it was still fine.
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- But, when I backed to home at night, no reason, it sucked, the screen was black.
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- On Monday, I took my computer to the engineer, he said my motherboard was ruined.
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- Finally, I paid NT.3800 to fix my computer.
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- It's really painful...
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