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My Family
My name is Milan .
There are four people in my family .
My father , my mother , my elder sister and I .
My father works in a computer company .
My mother is a housewife who is good at cooking .
There is a dog called Lucky is our pet .
We sometimes have a picnic in Baoan Park .
My sister likes watching movies so I usually watch movies with her .
Although we are not rich , but will smile everyday .

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- My name is Milan .
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- There are four people in my family .
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- My father , my mother , my elder sister and I .
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- My father works in a computer company .
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- My mother is a housewife who is good at cooking .
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- There is a dog called Lucky is our pet .
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- We sometimes have a picnic in Baoan Park .
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- My sister likes watching movies so I usually watch movies with her .
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- Although we are not rich , but will smile everyday .
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