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Before to the women oppen the door, I said to them " You will regret what you've done" Just after, I closed my eyes and I heard a 'bam'.
I wouldn't see the crime that I have comitted so I waited fews minuts.
When I oppened them, i saw a body on the floor, and someone who was talking alone.
The man looked at me and said to me " Why did you killed her ?" To answer to his question, I oppened the box which was on the desk and showed to him the diamond.

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문장 1
- Before to the women oppen the door, I said to them " You will regret what you've done" Just after, I closed my eyes and I heard a 'bam'.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
문장 2
- I wouldn't see the crime that I have comitted so I waited fews minuts.
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문장 3
- When I oppened them, i saw a body on the floor, and someone who was talking alone.
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문장 4
- The man looked at me and said to me " Why did you killed her ?" To answer to his question, I oppened the box which was on the desk and showed to him the diamond.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4