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My new friend
My new friend I´m so glad!
I found a new friend and I love talking to him...He is a patient friend, funny and a smart friend...it was all I wanted.
I hope to have so many friends =)

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- My new friend
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- My new friend I´m so glad!
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I found a new friend and I love talking to him...He is a patient friend, funny and a smart friend...it was all I wanted.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I hope to have so many friends =)
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3