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Text from ElvinaA - English

  • About me.

  • My name is Elvina.
  • I am in maternity leave and I look for the child and for home.
  • The age of my daughter is one year old and six month.
  • Her name is Emiliya.
  • We love our child.
  • Now I will tell about our daily routine.
  • Usually I get up at nine o’clock, because my daughter wakes up at this time.
  • We go to the bathroom wash and brush our teeth.
  • Then we go to breakfast.
  • Usually in the morning we eat porridge or omelet, fruit, sometimes vegetable puree and drink tea, milk or juice.
  • After breakfast we go for a walk to the Park of Victory.
  • Two hours later we go to home for a dinner.
  • It's maybe soup, mashed potato with meat, gratin with liver or another tasty and healthy food.
  • After dinner Emiliya goes to bed.
  • And I do the housework.
  • In the evening we go for a walk, to the guests or just sit at home. What else...
  • I graduated the pedagogical University in two thousand eight year but I didn't work as a teacher.
  • Before my maternity I worked in a kids store as a supervisor.
  • Earlier I worked in a store of perfume and cosmetic as a seller and then as an administrator.
  • My dream is to visit different countries of the world.
  • But I visited only one country - it is India.
  • It was in two thousand eleven year.
  • I was in love in this wonderful country.
  • I want to visit India else, in future.

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