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Eskimos
Did you know?Eskimos didnt have any word for war . they always lived in peace and lull.
Unfortunately,we have many word for war for example.WAR,FIGHT,BATTLE,AND......

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- Did you know?Eskimos didnt have any word for war . they always lived in peace and lull.
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- Unfortunately,we have many word for war for example.WAR,FIGHT,BATTLE,AND......
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