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Shopping
On weekend I made up shopping mind with my friends.
They care about me and we went to shopping togever.
As for me I had to bay jeans and t-shirt.
My friends help me to found out clouthes thet I need.They was so patient and calm,what was very surprising.
Because I hate shopping and it is torture to go shopping with me.
Well, we had some discourge to find something that suit me.
Though I require a lot, we cope with my requirement.
The main task was to cope with buying new jeans.
After hours of shopping I must made a choice and to buy quality and not expensive thing.
Eventually I did it.
And I was so happy, because my torture ended.

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- On weekend I made up shopping mind with my friends.
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句子 2
- They care about me and we went to shopping togever.
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句子 3
- As for me I had to bay jeans and t-shirt.
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句子 4
- My friends help me to found out clouthes thet I need.They was so patient and calm,what was very surprising.
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句子 5
- Because I hate shopping and it is torture to go shopping with me.
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句子 6
- Well, we had some discourge to find something that suit me.
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句子 7
- Though I require a lot, we cope with my requirement.
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句子 8
- The main task was to cope with buying new jeans.
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句子 9
- After hours of shopping I must made a choice and to buy quality and not expensive thing.
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句子 10
- Eventually I did it.
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句子 11
- And I was so happy, because my torture ended.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 11