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Please, help me.
Money took the leading position in human society a long time ago.
At first, there was barter, then gold reached the top and today it is money.
I think that existence of money is not evil.
*To some extent, the lack of money is evil.
For example, life in poverty often involves quarrels in families.
In addition, money is an indicator of social status in the modern world.
It is no secret that a lot of money gives you many opportunities and opens every door.

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- Money took the leading position in human society a long time ago.
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- At first, there was barter, then gold reached the top and today it is money.
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- I think that existence of money is not evil.
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- *To some extent, the lack of money is evil.
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- For example, life in poverty often involves quarrels in families.
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- In addition, money is an indicator of social status in the modern world.
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- It is no secret that a lot of money gives you many opportunities and opens every door.
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