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Art
For me the art can have several purpose.
He can show the talent of an artist and we are going to admire his work.
But he can also serve to pass on feelings or still to help in the understanding of the history.

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句子 1
- For me the art can have several purpose.
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句子 2
- He can show the talent of an artist and we are going to admire his work.
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句子 3
- But he can also serve to pass on feelings or still to help in the understanding of the history.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3