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Hi everyone
My name is cem.
I live in Turkey.
Greetings from the historical city of Istanbul.I have a bit of english level.
I'm asking for your help to improve. thanks loves.

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标题
- Hi everyone
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- My name is cem.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I live in Turkey.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- Greetings from the historical city of Istanbul.I have a bit of english level.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I'm asking for your help to improve. thanks loves.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4