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POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ TERAZ!Niepoprawione

Text from TanyaDudkina - English

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  • The article I'd like to render is entitled"New Russians' children are afraid of the police and turture toes" and I believe it was written by a journalist in the local newspaper.
  • This article is about how high status of parents in society negatively affects children's upbringing.
  • The author's communicative aim is to make parents reconsider their attitude to childrens' upbringing.
  • Otherwise they will lose their respect and trust.
  • In his article the author touches upon several problems related by parental upbringing mistakes, generation gap problems, a problem of wealth and poverty, a problem of relations with the dearest and nearest.
  • At the beginning of his article the author gives an example, in which a corresponded asks successful businessmen's children about their the same future successful lives.
  • None of the children say they want to be rich.

POMÓŻ POPRAWIĆ KAŻDE ZDANIE Z OSOBNA - English

  • Tytuł
  • Zdanie 1
    • The article I'd like to render is entitled"New Russians' children are afraid of the police and turture toes" and I believe it was written by a journalist in the local newspaper.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 1
  • Zdanie 2
  • Zdanie 3
  • Zdanie 4
  • Zdanie 5
    • In his article the author touches upon several problems related by parental upbringing mistakes, generation gap problems, a problem of wealth and poverty, a problem of relations with the dearest and nearest.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 5
  • Zdanie 6
    • At the beginning of his article the author gives an example, in which a corresponded asks successful businessmen's children about their the same future successful lives.
      Głosuj teraz!
    • DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6DODAJ NOWĄ KOREKTĘ! - Zdanie 6
  • Zdanie 7