Korrekturen

Text von TanyaDudkina - English

  • part 3

  • The author wants to make us sure that the 1st statement contains a stock of aggression.
  • It sounds so that the poor are lazy.
  • They don't know how to earn money.
  • In the next statement the parents try to answer that the rich and the poor are 2 different worlds.
  • The author is sure that because of the 2d suggestion children can be autistic.
  • They can experience difficulties in communicating which are not so good for parents.
  • The 3d statement makes children think that their parents are relevant of injustice.
  • It is fair to suggest that many problems arise from these statements related to fears and family conflicts.
  • Businessmen are Rick zones, where parents break on their children, but they would like to see in them strong people.
  • I share the author's opinion that inspire of hard work, high status of society and wealth parents shouldn't forget about their children.
  • They should try to find time for them, communicate with them.
  • I regard that parents should teach their children become people in every situation and parents should behave as people without swearing and aggressive actions.

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