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Neighbor
Once my neighbor took a mortgage on 5 years and forgot about it.Thus he owed so much money to the bank.
After 5 years he must paid a dabt or his house would be taken away.
But unfortunatly he had no fortune for paid dabt.He asked for postponement.
But bank refused on it.
Old neighbor soon retire.
He didn`t know what to do and how lond it would continued,how long he would to live in his house and not on the street.
Soon his employer rescured him,becouse they were old loyel friends.
His employer had a big fortune and paid dabt for my neighbor.

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문장 1
- Once my neighbor took a mortgage on 5 years and forgot about it.Thus he owed so much money to the bank.
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문장 2
- After 5 years he must paid a dabt or his house would be taken away.
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문장 3
- But unfortunatly he had no fortune for paid dabt.He asked for postponement.
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- But bank refused on it.
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문장 5
- Old neighbor soon retire.
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문장 6
- He didn`t know what to do and how lond it would continued,how long he would to live in his house and not on the street.
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문장 7
- Soon his employer rescured him,becouse they were old loyel friends.
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문장 8
- His employer had a big fortune and paid dabt for my neighbor.
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8