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  • Brazilian Carnaval

  • The last summer I went to Rio de Janeiro with my family.
  • If someone goes to Rio, they should attend the greatest Brazilian Carnaval.
  • So, me and my family took part of the event and everything was spectacular, the lights, the people, you could see bustling streets at any hour of the day.
  • Furthermore, everything was perfectly decorated and prepares for the event.
  • Something that called my attention was the people.
  • Everyone were wearing exotic customes, weird make-up, and you could feel the energy through their dance and cheerfulness.
  • They do not even care about the airborne pollution around them, they just enjoyed the party. I was amazed.
  • Although, there was a man who danced among the crowd.
  • He was handsome and a well-to-do person.
  • The point is that I never thought he could dance in that way.
  • He looked from another planet and a rip off person too since he was flirting with some beautiful women around him.
  • I always remember that summer in Brazil, that is why I usually have a gander to those photos.

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