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  • the pope's speech

  • The pope Francisco affirmed this Monday (27), during a speech in Pontiff sciences’ academy, that the evolution’s theory and the big bang are real and criticized the interpretation of the people whom read Genesis, thinking that God acted as a magician with a magic wand able to create everything.
  • According to him, the creation of the World was not a creation of the chaos, but comes from a supreme principle, which created for love.
  • The big bang does not contradict the God intervention, he says in the Pontiff inauguration.
  • The big bang is, according to the vast majority of the Scientific’s community, an explosion that gives birth to universe’s expansion.
  • On the other hand, the evolution’s theory, initiated by the British Charles Darwin, upholds that the life is not immutable and it can be transformed seeking the best way to adapt to the environment by natural selection

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    • The pope Francisco affirmed this Monday (27), during a speech in Pontiff sciences’ academy, that the evolution’s theory and the big bang are real and criticized the interpretation of the people whom read Genesis, thinking that God acted as a magician with a magic wand able to create everything.
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    • According to him, the creation of the World was not a creation of the chaos, but comes from a supreme principle, which created for love.
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    • The big bang is, according to the vast majority of the Scientific’s community, an explosion that gives birth to universe’s expansion.
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    • On the other hand, the evolution’s theory, initiated by the British Charles Darwin, upholds that the life is not immutable and it can be transformed seeking the best way to adapt to the environment by natural selection
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