添削

添削のお手伝いをしましょう！未修正

ThierryParisからのテキスト - English

  • Yesterday - Description of walking

  • Last night, at the end of the afternoon, I took the parisian subway to go to a shop specialized in games, particularly chess game.
  • I went down to underground C. d'A.
  • Lafayette station, I went up the steps.
  • At the exit, I turned on my left, I walked on the ground on 200 meters, there was a lot of people ont the street because it was the end of the working day.
  • As usual, people is fast to find their friends for a drink, or to go home to join their families and share a dinner.
  • I crossed a safety passage especially for walkers, adn after 2 minutes, I arrived to the shop.
  • Why did I go to this game shop ?
  • Because, last week, I bought a chess set, and there was a mistake, there had a pawn in place of a knight.
  • The sailor was kind, he apologized, and I have now a black knight.
  • Now, I'm happy, I will not be disturbed by this piece, I can play with other people to improve my level.

添削の手助けをお願いします！ - English