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I miss this place so much, especially the ocean where i can meditation my mind & listening my fav song.
I hope i can go aventure again , cant get enough of it.

ishaharridNovember 2014赶紧投票吧！
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- Please correct my english
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句子 1
- I miss this place so much, especially the ocean where i can meditation my mind & listening my fav song.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I hope i can go aventure again , cant get enough of it.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2