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  • people will spend less time on cooking food in the future

  • Cooking is a necessary process for us to get raw food ripe.
  • Will people spend more time on cooking in the futrue?
  • I don't think so.
  • I think people would spend less time on cooking for those three reasons: social development, technology improvement and more attentions for health.
  • First of all, as the development of social distinction, people are expected to focus on more specific positions that they are intrested and good at, which make a greater contribution to the all society.
  • Consequentely, restaurants are cleaner and dishes are more delicious and healthy for cook chiefs are more gifted and devoted.
  • People who don't like cooking are willing to spend time on working, which make more money for them to go to diiner hall, or other things.
  • In conclusion, social development will definitely make people cook less.
  • Besides, technology improves so that we will use cookers that take less time,which decrease cooking time obviously, and even roborts may be used and make human-beings free of the labour of cooking.
  • As a result, less time are spent for every meal.
  • Finally, people in future should pay more attentions on health.
  • They are readier for originate taste of food and hate their food overcooked, which is favoratable to short the cooking time.
  • As a conclusion, people will short the cooking time in the future for social development decrease the number of people who cook and technology improvement and attentions for health decrease the time of every single meals.

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    • I think people would spend less time on cooking for those three reasons: social development, technology improvement and more attentions for health.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
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    • First of all, as the development of social distinction, people are expected to focus on more specific positions that they are intrested and good at, which make a greater contribution to the all society.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
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    • Consequentely, restaurants are cleaner and dishes are more delicious and healthy for cook chiefs are more gifted and devoted.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
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    • People who don't like cooking are willing to spend time on working, which make more money for them to go to diiner hall, or other things.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 7
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    • Besides, technology improves so that we will use cookers that take less time,which decrease cooking time obviously, and even roborts may be used and make human-beings free of the labour of cooking.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9
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    • They are readier for originate taste of food and hate their food overcooked, which is favoratable to short the cooking time.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 12
  • Vakya 13
    • As a conclusion, people will short the cooking time in the future for social development decrease the number of people who cook and technology improvement and attentions for health decrease the time of every single meals.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 13ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 13