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Holiday
I am going to go holiday next summer.
I want to visit to Spain.
I was in Barselona year ago.
I visited a lot of beautiful and famous plases.

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句子 1
- I am going to go holiday next summer.
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句子 2
- I want to visit to Spain.
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句子 3
- I was in Barselona year ago.
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句子 4
- I visited a lot of beautiful and famous plases.
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