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從ElvinaA來的文本 - English

  • About my travelling

  • In 2011 I was in India.
  • First, I flew to Dabolim.
  • Then my hasband and I went to Goa by bus.
  • I spent in India 2 weeks.
  • I saw interesting things, I ate very tasty meals, I met very kind people, I got a lot of emotions.

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