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Please correct my English.
I hope it would worth the wait waiting for the key to open.
I miss ur voice saying those words. thats make me stay.
Sorry i can't make you want me as much as i want you.

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- Please correct my English.
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- I hope it would worth the wait waiting for the key to open.
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Sentence 2
- I miss ur voice saying those words. thats make me stay.
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- Sorry i can't make you want me as much as i want you.
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