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midnight_tiger'den mesaj - English

An advertisement of a video for my friends
My friend A*** filmed the entire [the band name] show at the [...
Fair] in [a city name] as well as a few episodes where D*** is hanging out with some of you, wonderful cosplayers.
At last A*** shared the video on YouTube (eventually/ finally/ about time?
Which word I have to use to sound more politely?
Kinda I'm glad he did it - though we all were awaiting so long time, - not like, "Couldn't he do it in time?").
Come and try to find yourself if you were there...

Başlık
- An advertisement of a video for my friends
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - Başlık
cümle 1
- My friend A*** filmed the entire [the band name] show at the [...
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 1
cümle 2
- Fair] in [a city name] as well as a few episodes where D*** is hanging out with some of you, wonderful cosplayers.
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 2
cümle 3
- At last A*** shared the video on YouTube (eventually/ finally/ about time?
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 3
cümle 4
- Which word I have to use to sound more politely?
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 4
cümle 5
- Kinda I'm glad he did it - though we all were awaiting so long time, - not like, "Couldn't he do it in time?").
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 5
cümle 6
- Come and try to find yourself if you were there...
  Şİmdi oyla!
- YENİ bir DÜZELTME EKLE! - cümle 6