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  • Book : The curious cas of Benjamin Button

  • In this book, we can see a curious story about a child, all the plot is at his birth, because he have a problem.
  • He was born old and its parents refuse who he's their child I choose a chapter 3, because it's after M.Button has realize this "baby" it's his son.
  • And so he come back to the shopping where he has buy a costume et made a lot of change like cut his hair and his beard, make a color unnatural black.
  • All this passage is funny because we see the personnage who is desperate but who try to accept a situation then one hours before he rejet his son but in the street he was undersheet wrong and one time in this house he want who the old man play with a toys and Benjamin accept for make it fun

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    • In this book, we can see a curious story about a child, all the plot is at his birth, because he have a problem.
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    • He was born old and its parents refuse who he's their child I choose a chapter 3, because it's after M.Button has realize this "baby" it's his son.
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    • And so he come back to the shopping where he has buy a costume et made a lot of change like cut his hair and his beard, make a color unnatural black.
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    • All this passage is funny because we see the personnage who is desperate but who try to accept a situation then one hours before he rejet his son but in the street he was undersheet wrong and one time in this house he want who the old man play with a toys and Benjamin accept for make it fun
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