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Autumn.
So,I want to talk about autumn holidays.
The wether in autumn can be windy,rainy and chilly.
As for me,I don`t like it.But that does not stop my malking outdoors to breath the fresh air.
Because I enjoy takig long waiks with my friends.
Frankly speaking,I enjoy my autumn holidays becouse i can sleep a lot,read books,listening to music and walk with my friends. what about you,how you spend your autumn holidays?
What do you do?How long are your holidays?

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- So,I want to talk about autumn holidays.
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- The wether in autumn can be windy,rainy and chilly.
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- As for me,I don`t like it.But that does not stop my malking outdoors to breath the fresh air.
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- Because I enjoy takig long waiks with my friends.
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- Frankly speaking,I enjoy my autumn holidays becouse i can sleep a lot,read books,listening to music and walk with my friends. what about you,how you spend your autumn holidays?
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