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  • homework : write a personal funny story

  • I have a very funny story but i don't how to protect its sense of humour .
  • These is some events : - last year my sister asked me to watch chinese opera she told me that it's very different so .
  • I was so excited to watch the video.
  • - when the music started i confirmed what my sister told because i never had listen to such music .
  • The surprise was when the singer (a woman) sing ..
  • omg the song was funny and i couldn't stop laughing.
  • - i showed it to my friend/colleague he told that he was not able to finish the video he thought that it was terrible.
  • - the day after we had a history's lesson , the teacher asked my friend to read some documents about chinese economic , so he began to read ... suddenly he started to laugh ,the teacher was angry ,me and our colleagues were wondering .
  • The teacher ordered him to leave and not to attend the lesson.
  • - when i came back to home i chatted with him he told me that i was the reason of what happened he asked me to open the history book and to see a specefic picture .... i was shocked when i saw a chinese woman that she looked like the singer ( for us all the chinese are one ) i understood what happened in the history lesson.

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    • These is some events : - last year my sister asked me to watch chinese opera she told me that it's very different so .
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
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    • - i showed it to my friend/colleague he told that he was not able to finish the video he thought that it was terrible.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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    • - the day after we had a history's lesson , the teacher asked my friend to read some documents about chinese economic , so he began to read ... suddenly he started to laugh ,the teacher was angry ,me and our colleagues were wondering .
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 8
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    • - when i came back to home i chatted with him he told me that i was the reason of what happened he asked me to open the history book and to see a specefic picture .... i was shocked when i saw a chinese woman that she looked like the singer ( for us all the chinese are one ) i understood what happened in the history lesson.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10