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Văn bản từ fall9411 - English

  • one attempt to write with rhymes in english

  • Hello there!
  • Sometimes I try to write something what shows how I feel.
  • I wouldn't say I'm a poet, but I create things like this.
  • This is my first attempt in english: Imagine a world where you can trust everyone imagine that nobody cheats on no one imagine a world where power equals love imagine that nobody reigns other ones imagine a world where everything is beautiful imagine that everywhere you look is peaceful imagine a world where no such thing as race imagine that everyone has got a place imagine a wolrd where you see what you want imagine that you see really what you want imagine a world where all people do die imagine that before, they live really their lives imagine a world where you could be free imagnine that as an adult you still climb a tree imagine a world what is like this all imagine that world is exist at all Thanks for reading and correcting! :)

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    • This is my first attempt in english: Imagine a world where you can trust everyone imagine that nobody cheats on no one imagine a world where power equals love imagine that nobody reigns other ones imagine a world where everything is beautiful imagine that everywhere you look is peaceful imagine a world where no such thing as race imagine that everyone has got a place imagine a wolrd where you see what you want imagine that you see really what you want imagine a world where all people do die imagine that before, they live really their lives imagine a world where you could be free imagnine that as an adult you still climb a tree imagine a world what is like this all imagine that world is exist at all Thanks for reading and correcting! :)
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