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Κείμενο από LuanaRbcht - English

English redaction
Hello everybody, my name is Luna and I on BBC radio today for you speak about my kidnapping when I was little, I was only four years old but I remember everything.
It was a sunday, this day it was the day or everybody play outside.
The sun was present, good mood too, my mother made me a red dress and suddenly two vans have appeared and from this moment the drama was among in my life.

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- English redaction
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- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Τίτλος
Πρόταση 1
- Hello everybody, my name is Luna and I on BBC radio today for you speak about my kidnapping when I was little, I was only four years old but I remember everything.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 1
Πρόταση 2
- It was a sunday, this day it was the day or everybody play outside.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 2
Πρόταση 3
- The sun was present, good mood too, my mother made me a red dress and suddenly two vans have appeared and from this moment the drama was among in my life.
  Ψηφίστε τώρα!
- ΠΡΟΣΘΕΣΤΕ μία ΝΕΑ ΔΙΟΡΘΩΣΗ! - Πρόταση 3