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Together Forever
Wang yao looked at the snow with Alfred.
Their shoulders covered in snow.
They who were not gentle just went forward without a word.
Suddenly, the blond boy stopped.
Wang yao looked back at him , his eyes were bright and nice."Yao, if we have been so go on, the snow covered with hair, is that means'together forever'? "

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- Together Forever
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câu 1
- Wang yao looked at the snow with Alfred.
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câu 2
- Their shoulders covered in snow.
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câu 3
- They who were not gentle just went forward without a word.
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câu 4
- Suddenly, the blond boy stopped.
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câu 5
- Wang yao looked back at him , his eyes were bright and nice."Yao, if we have been so go on, the snow covered with hair, is that means'together forever'? "
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5