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  • My week-end

  • It was good, I spent the time with my friends especially when my friend finished his military service and come back to his home, we went to the farm of my friend's grandfather, we sit on his garden playing guitar and flute but I was just listening because I can't play anyone of those things.
  • After that, me and another friend start cooking for lunch but potatoes were burned when when I was frying, so my friends take the chance for mocking me then we had our lunch.
  • We sit on the hall of the house after finishing lunch and we start talking about many things and saying some jokes.
  • Now It's 6 PM, each one return home.
  • We had a great time and It was one of my best days.

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    • It was good, I spent the time with my friends especially when my friend finished his military service and come back to his home, we went to the farm of my friend's grandfather, we sit on his garden playing guitar and flute but I was just listening because I can't play anyone of those things.
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    • After that, me and another friend start cooking for lunch but potatoes were burned when when I was frying, so my friends take the chance for mocking me then we had our lunch.
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    • We sit on the hall of the house after finishing lunch and we start talking about many things and saying some jokes.
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