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Today, 23 febrary.
Hi, i'm new here.
I am french, i live in Paris.
I want to speak better english !
Today, the sky is grey and there is a very cold wind from sibera.
I want to watch a new movie on my computer or maybe to the cinema !
But for the moment i'm at home.
I search someone for speak in english. Thanks !

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- Today, 23 febrary.
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- Hi, i'm new here.
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문장 2
- I am french, i live in Paris.
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문장 3
- I want to speak better english !
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문장 4
- Today, the sky is grey and there is a very cold wind from sibera.
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문장 5
- I want to watch a new movie on my computer or maybe to the cinema !
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문장 6
- But for the moment i'm at home.
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문장 7
- I search someone for speak in english. Thanks !
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