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Hi.. I want to be a your friend.
I want to learn english. Umm...
Last winter, i came back in USA and CANADA.
At that time, i so harded.
Becouse i dont speaking english very well.
So...want to learn from USA friend.
And i can help your korean study.
Would you become friend?

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- I want to learn english. Umm...
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- Last winter, i came back in USA and CANADA.
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- At that time, i so harded.
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- Becouse i dont speaking english very well.
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- So...want to learn from USA friend.
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- And i can help your korean study.
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- Would you become friend?
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