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To Macy Smith Hi,Macy,this is Robyn.
I think I left my watches in your house yesterday.Could you look for my watch,please?
It is very important thing to me.
My grandmom had given me when I was little.
I think it is on the table near the sofa.
Look for it,please,and call me Robyn.

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句子 1
- To Macy Smith Hi,Macy,this is Robyn.
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句子 2
- I think I left my watches in your house yesterday.Could you look for my watch,please?
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句子 3
- It is very important thing to me.
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句子 4
- My grandmom had given me when I was little.
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句子 5
- I think it is on the table near the sofa.
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- Look for it,please,and call me Robyn.
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