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A little about me
Hi!
My name is Anna. I'm 26.
I live in Russia, but I was born in Kazakhstan.
I like music and handmade.
I love my husband Alexander and my little daughter Alice.
A few years ago I finished college where I studied english and deutch a little.
For this time I began to forget some words and rules.
So I want to remember and to know new.
I dream to speak English fluently.
I hope you will help me.

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- My name is Anna. I'm 26.
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- A few years ago I finished college where I studied english and deutch a little.
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- For this time I began to forget some words and rules.
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