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Văn bản từ Yanqing-Zhou - English

  • The Familiar Places of My Memory

  • There many familiar places left me with a very deep impression when I was growing up.
  • Since I was in kindergarten,the garden in my neighborhood was the place which I had ever really been familiar with.
  • The trees gave welcome shade here all the year round.People would enjoy the cool there each summer.
  • There were many small ponds in the garden where children had fun.I still remember the time I went fishing with my playmates.We are so impatient that we never caught anything.But my father caught many things such as little fish,shrimps even a loach.
  • However, we released all of them later.
  • It was the place that I was familiar with at my early age.But it had disappeared completely at present.I really miss the good old days when it was a lot happier and simpler.
  • When I was in primary school,the place grew over with weeds in my school was what I was familiar with.
  • After the summer vacation,we returned back to school to get rid of the weeds,which our class teacher led us to.We could see the fields which with weeds in only two months were taller than people,which surprised us a lot.We were busy working there.
  • All kinds of great trees grew here.I guessed that they must survive for several decades.
  • There were many bushes where many nameless plants grew.
  • We often took Biology class which is one of my favorite courses in my campus life of primary school.
  • I enjoyed watching insects and flowers.I loved sunflowers,their disks were even bigger than my face,and always moved towards the sun.They always gave others warmth,as if they led us towards the light.
  • Who can always pursue his goals even though he have a short life?
  • They raised me up in my childhood.I learned a lot from that places.They are the best memories of my childhood.

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    • Since I was in kindergarten,the garden in my neighborhood was the place which I had ever really been familiar with.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • There were many small ponds in the garden where children had fun.I still remember the time I went fishing with my playmates.We are so impatient that we never caught anything.But my father caught many things such as little fish,shrimps even a loach.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • It was the place that I was familiar with at my early age.But it had disappeared completely at present.I really miss the good old days when it was a lot happier and simpler.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
  • câu 7
    • When I was in primary school,the place grew over with weeds in my school was what I was familiar with.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
  • câu 8
    • After the summer vacation,we returned back to school to get rid of the weeds,which our class teacher led us to.We could see the fields which with weeds in only two months were taller than people,which surprised us a lot.We were busy working there.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 8
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    • I enjoyed watching insects and flowers.I loved sunflowers,their disks were even bigger than my face,and always moved towards the sun.They always gave others warmth,as if they led us towards the light.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 12
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    • They raised me up in my childhood.I learned a lot from that places.They are the best memories of my childhood.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 14