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Văn bản từ Sleepy-7 - English

  • Write a relaunch

  • Dir Sir, I sent you an email two months ago about a spontaneous application for an internship in your company.
  • With no answer from you I take the liberty of sending you another again.
  • I would like to remind to you my great interest in your firm and consultancy activity and underline the fact that I am greatly motivate by the possibility to work with you.
  • Placing an important wish by the eventuality to get a place in your company, I still waiting for an aswer from you, Sincerely,

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
    • Dir Sir, I sent you an email two months ago about a spontaneous application for an internship in your company.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
    • I would like to remind to you my great interest in your firm and consultancy activity and underline the fact that I am greatly motivate by the possibility to work with you.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Placing an important wish by the eventuality to get a place in your company, I still waiting for an aswer from you, Sincerely,
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4