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  • Summer 2014

  • This summer, I spend my holiday at my friend's home, Jérémie.
  • Jérémie is as my older brother.
  • He's 19, he lives in France for his studies but he comes to Guadeloupe to see his family.
  • Then, every time he comes for holiday, I sleep at his home.
  • His family is my family.
  • I love them like mine.
  • He leaves in a few day. I'm sad.
  • Time is soon over.
  • To take advantage of last days, we decide to go to the beach.
  • The weather is sunny this morning.
  • We put our swimsuits, eat little, and go the beach. It's crowded.
  • There are a lot of people today.
  • We find a little place to put our towels and go at once to the water.
  • When we finished, we go back to home to take a shower.
  • The women at first. I finished.
  • I sit on the sofa and I watch TV, when a boy comes to interrupt me.
  • He wants that I call Jérémie.

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