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Text from giihsena - English

  • Rouquinha the cat

  • Today I went to a park near my house, to read LOTR and to get some fresh air, and then I saw a beautiful black cat (this park has cats and some other animals and I crazy about cats).
  • I call it (the cat) and suddenly it was on my nap and stayed there for more than two and a half hours, even if I tried to take it out of my nap so I could go home, it didn't want me to leave.
  • I felt in love with it, and gave her a name "rouquinha" because of her hoarse meow.

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    • Today I went to a park near my house, to read LOTR and to get some fresh air, and then I saw a beautiful black cat (this park has cats and some other animals and I crazy about cats).
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    • I call it (the cat) and suddenly it was on my nap and stayed there for more than two and a half hours, even if I tried to take it out of my nap so I could go home, it didn't want me to leave.
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