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  • My grandfather

  • I speak about my grandfather.
  • Actually he is been retired.
  • I chose to speak about him because I amire him a lot.
  • Firstly, when he was young he mad the war in Algeria, in 1954.
  • And is having a great impact on him.
  • He can stand no longer violence.
  • Furthermore he prefer study new subjects evryday.
  • Secondly, he learned me the bookbinding manually.
  • It is the method and apparatus for making book binding.
  • When i was young I wanted to made books.
  • In nutshell, my grandfather is for me an important people and very interessting

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