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  • Smile, a Teacher!

  • The article I'd like to render is entitled "Smile, a Teacher!" and I am sure it was written by a highly skilled teacher in a local newspaper.
  • The article is about how healthy humour positivly affects of children's upbringing and the atmosphere in a class.
  • The author's communicative aim is to make other teachers or kindergartens reconsider their approaches of children's upbringing.
  • In his article the author touches upon several problems related by a problem of relations between classmates, a problem of children's upbtinging, sense of responsibility and healthy sense of humour, a problem of breaches of discipline in a class.
  • At the beginning of his article a teacher gives an example, in which a mentally retarted girl is mocked by a newcomer boy, because she falls her control test.
  • A newcomer boy feels diffident, because he laughs along.
  • A teacher makes children reconsider their attitude to failures of their peers, don't laugh and don't imitate others.
  • The author of the article takes up a firm attitude to control these situations and should be happy and laugh.
  • The author declares, that teachers should tear children a sense of compassion, virtue, shame and self-confidence.
  • The author wants to make us ponder over that crude humour can grow into teenagers from the children's innocent laugher.
  • Therefore, the author is sure that teachers should pay attention to this aspect in the juniors.
  • The author gives us a witty saying that humour is the shortest way to achieving the main aims of education and upbringing.
  • So that, a teacher can say his class in order without any difficulties and violent conflicts.
  • Then the author gives us an example how he arranges a children's theatre "Twinkle" which combines two essential qualities a sense of humour and a sense of relations why and on what people laugh.
  • A teacher of the article is surprased how children like his idea and become to participate in his venture.
  • The author arouses in us a feeling of joy that he make nobody learn poems by heart.
  • All pupils do it with pleasure.
  • The author proclaims that teacher brings children together, educates sense of responsibility and creates warm atmosphere in a class.
  • The author comes to say children quotations instead of long hints.
  • The author crabs children's mistakes using such cheerful quotations.
  • According to it pupils check its.
  • The author gives us Moyakovski's statement in which he declares that schools need an additional subject where teaches become to mould the techniques of wit.
  • I share the author's opinion that one of the most significant aim of a teacher is to raise children healthy sense of humour.
  • This aspect will help avoid breaches of discipline in a class and also educate humanity and sense of responsibility in children.

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  • 문장 1
    • The article I'd like to render is entitled "Smile, a Teacher!" and I am sure it was written by a highly skilled teacher in a local newspaper.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 1
  • 문장 2
    • The article is about how healthy humour positivly affects of children's upbringing and the atmosphere in a class.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 2
  • 문장 3
    • The author's communicative aim is to make other teachers or kindergartens reconsider their approaches of children's upbringing.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 3
  • 문장 4
    • In his article the author touches upon several problems related by a problem of relations between classmates, a problem of children's upbtinging, sense of responsibility and healthy sense of humour, a problem of breaches of discipline in a class.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4
  • 문장 5
    • At the beginning of his article a teacher gives an example, in which a mentally retarted girl is mocked by a newcomer boy, because she falls her control test.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 5
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  • 문장 7
    • A teacher makes children reconsider their attitude to failures of their peers, don't laugh and don't imitate others.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 7
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  • 문장 9
    • The author declares, that teachers should tear children a sense of compassion, virtue, shame and self-confidence.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9
  • 문장 10
    • The author wants to make us ponder over that crude humour can grow into teenagers from the children's innocent laugher.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 10
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  • 문장 12
    • The author gives us a witty saying that humour is the shortest way to achieving the main aims of education and upbringing.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 12
  • 문장 13
  • 문장 14
    • Then the author gives us an example how he arranges a children's theatre "Twinkle" which combines two essential qualities a sense of humour and a sense of relations why and on what people laugh.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 14
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  • 문장 18
    • The author proclaims that teacher brings children together, educates sense of responsibility and creates warm atmosphere in a class.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 18ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 18
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  • 문장 22
    • The author gives us Moyakovski's statement in which he declares that schools need an additional subject where teaches become to mould the techniques of wit.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 22ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 22
  • 문장 23
    • I share the author's opinion that one of the most significant aim of a teacher is to raise children healthy sense of humour.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 23ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 23
  • 문장 24
    • This aspect will help avoid breaches of discipline in a class and also educate humanity and sense of responsibility in children.
      투표하세요!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 24ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 24