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It´s me.
I would like to tell you a little about my life.
My name is Xenia ( I know, it is weird) and I am a spanish girl.
I have been living in Gijón since ever, which is a town in the north of Spain.
I am 23 years old and I finished my degree in nursery the last year.
I am currently teaching retired people how to develope a healthy lifestyle, although it seems to be they are not interested in following my advises...
I joined this website because I want to get my Certificate in English, and actually, I am taking lessons for it.

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- My name is Xenia ( I know, it is weird) and I am a spanish girl.
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- I joined this website because I want to get my Certificate in English, and actually, I am taking lessons for it.
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