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A short letter
A short letter saying why I would be a good person for the job in my local coffee shop.
******************* I'm interested in becoming a Saturday assistant at "Coffee Rest".
I've lived in London for two years.
And befor I lived in USA one year.
I studied English five years and I got a certificate "Intermediate Level" by Russian English school for three years ago.
I've never worked in a coffee shop, but I was a waiter in a restaurant in Russia last summer, where I spent two months.

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- A short letter saying why I would be a good person for the job in my local coffee shop.
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- ******************* I'm interested in becoming a Saturday assistant at "Coffee Rest".
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- I've lived in London for two years.
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- And befor I lived in USA one year.
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- I studied English five years and I got a certificate "Intermediate Level" by Russian English school for three years ago.
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- I've never worked in a coffee shop, but I was a waiter in a restaurant in Russia last summer, where I spent two months.
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