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Văn bản từ mapip - English

  • The nanny State

  • As Introduction I have to say that sometimes our Government try to protect us giving recomendations.
  • Nevertheless, everybody don´t agree with them.
  • One example could be the Health Service Deparment Suggestions.
  • Therefore I want to talk about vaccination, thaat I think is the most important preventive measure who affects every single person in our country, especially children and senior citizens.
  • From my point of view there are some vaccines that could be the best option for our health because its prevent high mortality rate illness.
  • Moreover , I think it´s an excessive measure to vaccinate the population for influenza every year.
  • It is for that reason that I think government should recommend but giving freedom to decide everyone the things that we think are better for us.

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

  • Tiêu đề
  • câu 1
  • câu 2
  • câu 3
  • câu 4
    • Therefore I want to talk about vaccination, thaat I think is the most important preventive measure who affects every single person in our country, especially children and senior citizens.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • From my point of view there are some vaccines that could be the best option for our health because its prevent high mortality rate illness.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
  • câu 6
  • câu 7
    • It is for that reason that I think government should recommend but giving freedom to decide everyone the things that we think are better for us.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7