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Introduction
My name is Ivan.
I work in technical support as an engineer in medical electronics.
My company deals with lab analyzers.
This field is quite interesting for me, so I work with pleasure.
English is needed for me to communicate with other people, esecially if I go to a foreign country.
The first my travel experience was a travel to Germany for two weeks.
There was a chance to practice foreign language.
Anyway, it is fun to be understood by other people and to know what do other talk about.

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- Introduction
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- My name is Ivan.
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- I work in technical support as an engineer in medical electronics.
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- My company deals with lab analyzers.
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- This field is quite interesting for me, so I work with pleasure.
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- English is needed for me to communicate with other people, esecially if I go to a foreign country.
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- The first my travel experience was a travel to Germany for two weeks.
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- There was a chance to practice foreign language.
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- Anyway, it is fun to be understood by other people and to know what do other talk about.
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