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Text from Leanne76 - English

  • Few things about me

  • I'm just trying to write a little text in english.
  • Indeed, I want to know if my english is correct, or not.
  • So, I can tell you about myself.
  • I'm Léanne and I'm 16 years old.
  • I study theater in school, it's my passion.
  • I'm a kind of singer, too.
  • I'm not professional but, I think that I'm not bad.
  • I love rock and punk music but I listen jazz and soul music too.
  • I did a concert today and for the first time I was payed !
  • That's cool because, I just had to sing and... win the money.
  • But, it was a difficult exercice because, in this kind of concert, people don't really listen to you.
  • They are speaking and don't clap at the end of your song.
  • However, I know that I'm not Beyonce so I can't be sad because GOD !
  • I won money just for singing, that's amazing.
  • Ok, now, your know how was my day, it was pretty cool !

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English