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Văn bản từ carolinevllry - English

  • profesional life

  • I think that it's possible to follow our dreams if we want that.
  • That depend of your goal, but if you really want do something, it's like you've need that, and you can with all the people who are behind/around you, who are here for you.
  • We all want to do the job we dreamed and we know a lot of person who succeed in life; however we know people who missed/failed.
  • So we must take the exemple of people who win because it will be a modal for us, if we take exemple on the people who loose, it will be a wrong way!
  • Finaly, the question is not it is possible to follow our dreams, in fact /basually it should be : Do you really want go away even if you fall, go away your profesional life dream ?

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  • câu 1
  • câu 2
    • That depend of your goal, but if you really want do something, it's like you've need that, and you can with all the people who are behind/around you, who are here for you.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
  • câu 3
    • We all want to do the job we dreamed and we know a lot of person who succeed in life; however we know people who missed/failed.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • So we must take the exemple of people who win because it will be a modal for us, if we take exemple on the people who loose, it will be a wrong way!
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
  • câu 5
    • Finaly, the question is not it is possible to follow our dreams, in fact /basually it should be : Do you really want go away even if you fall, go away your profesional life dream ?
      Bầu chọn ngay!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5